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Riku and Rosea have been walking all day to get to Tao Village, they notice a lot of new and strange Pokémon also there in the Small Village. They wait in front of the door for a half hour before Riku decides to knock.

Come in, come in! My goodness, come in! I can't believe you've all been waiting outside in the rain all this time! You could have knocked earlier, you know!

"This is what we get for being polite Rosy" said Riku

My name is Callahan, or Calla, for short. I'm the guild registrar, you know. I'm quite good at it!

"My name is Rose-" she tried to say before getting cut off

The paperwork, of course! There will be a lot of that, don't you worry one bit!

*Riku and Rosea just look at each other confused why he was smiling about that*

You do have the forms that we've mailed you filled out, yes? That does always make things go much quicker here.

"Yes we do" Rosea said cheerfully *she turns to Riku* "What?" Riku said dumbfounded "You were the one who was responsible for holding them" She said to him sternly "Right, I think I accidently used those as napkins when we got something to eat when entering the Village" Riku says snidely laughing "Look on the bright side, at least we ain't hungry no more" he smiles while saying.

What's this? These forms are all crumpled up and covered in saliva and crumbs! Goodness, we're in for a lot more paperwork than I could have hoped to dream of!

No matter, I have spare forms, and all the time in the world! I trust you have no pressing appointments yet, so I'll write down your information now.

With your help, of course.

"It's quite alright, Riku don't like paperwork but I am quite fine with it" she says smiling. Riku just grumbles on the side.

Let's get right down to it, shall we? My fastest time for entering a team in the official guild registrar is a touch under a few hours; let's see if we can break the record!

All right now.. names, please?

"I am Rosea, and this is-" once again cut off "And I am Riku!" he says chuckling and being stared at by his partner

Ahh.. what.. commo- er, good names you all have! How do you spell them?

"Seriously?" Riku comments. Rosea gives him a rough nudge on the head "It is spelled R-O-S-E-A for me, and his is spelled R-I-K-U" She says happily.

Interesting spelling! Are you foreign? French, perhaps?

"What's French?" Riku says under her breath. "We are not from this area, a great distance we have traveled really" She replies to Calla.

Ah, no, forget it, France is just made up here, you know. Often used as comic relief. Er, just forget that.

Moving on!

What alias do you wish to give you lot of fellows? I hope it's something good! I've been so bored by Pokémon insisting to use a name like "Team Awesome" or anything of the sort. More like "Team Mediocrity," I like to think! I'm sure you have a much more original name.

"What I could really go for is some R&R Rosy" Said Riku yawning a bit. "Focus Riku, he wants a Team Name" She tells him. "How bout R&R, Team R&R it is!" He yells triumphantly  

I knew you wouldn't let me down! Is that the normal spelling, or do you insist on losing letters, or replacing them altogether entirely? (I hope not..)

"Just an R followed by an Ampersand and then another R is all" Rosea said.

And.. done. All right! Next topic!

You there, lad! You seem to be the leader of the team, here. Why don't you tell me about yourself? Please make it interesting! I'm not filing a police report, you know. I don't get paid for this, either. I do it for the stories people tell! Everyone has a story! (Some are better than others, though. That's for sure..) However, I do hope yours isn't filled to the brim with angst and darkness, you know. We have enough of that as it is with the recent crises we've been going through!

If you insist on weaving a yarn of incredible sadness and general malaise, please make it good. I'll discern the necessary details from your story and put it down in the log book here.

"Sorry, but we don't really have one for ya" Riku says while chuckling "We traveled a long distance is all we really have to tell, it wasn't really very interesting, sorry" Rosea explains. "That is why we wish to join the Rogues! For adventure and awesome fun!" Riku blurts out.

Ah, I see. What a shame. I can see why you'd probably like to join the Rogues Guild then.

Very well, then! It seems I have all I need in order to register you here in our peaceful Tao Village! Just to make sure all the facts are correct, please look over them and sign your initials at the bottom! Don't forget to sign off on your belongings! You wouldn't believe how many people forget their accessories, only to leave them here with me! (Please don't do that, I have so many things cluttering up my attic in dusty old boxes..)


Team Name: R&R Rank: Farfetch'd

Member 1: Riku the Zorua Male
Member 2: Rosea the Solosis Female
Member 3: Male/Female
Member 4: Male/Female

Member 1 Trait & Personality: Impish/Somewhat of a clown
Member 2 Trait & Personality: Calm/Often lost in thought
Member 3 Trait & Personality:
Member 4 Trait & Personality:

Member 1 moves:
Fury Swipes – Two Claws come out of his paws and glow white, he then scratches the Opponent Repeatedly.
Faint Attack – He fades into the thin air then reappears behind the Opponent then attacks.
Agility – His speed rises greatly, as he speeds through the area he leaves a transparent afterimage of himself.
Detect – His eyes glow, as they do he evades all attacks that are sent at him, he also likes to dance when using this move.
Member 2 moves:
Hidden Power – Her body glows Pink and she summons Pink Energy Orbs that she sends at the opponent.
Light Screen – She creates a Sphere made of hexagonal shapes around her, she can also increase the size of this Sphere but doing so drains her.
Psychic – Her Body and Eyes start to glow, she then can lift any small object in her way, lifting Larger Objects drains her.
Trick – Her Eyes glow and flash blue, as this happens she switches the opponents held item with something she is holding.
Member 3 moves:
Member 4 moves:

Member 1 accessories: N/A
Member 2 accessories: N/A
Member 3 accessories:
Member 4 accessories:

Desired Guild affiliation: Rogues

By signing here, you agree that the above information is correct and true to the best of your knowledge.

Signature 1: Riku Date:
Signature 2: Rosea Date:
Signature 3: Date:
Signature 4: Date:


"Everything is in order from the looks of it" Rosea says smiling. Riku yawns "Are we ready to go yet? I would like to find a nice, cozy tree to lay under" "I do have one question" Rosea says "There is only two of us?" She asks.

What's that, you say? There is only two of you? Of course I know that! I do have eyes, you know! What if, during your travels, you decide to recruit, or add on an extra member to your team? Would you really want them to fill out all this paperwork from scratch? There's no problem with me for that, I assure you! This is just a convenient foresight! There is only room enough for four signatures on here, though, so please, no more members than that!

"Ah, well that does make sense" Rosea says. "So we can recruit others into our merry little band of misfits" Riku chuckles "How fun!"

Well, now! I don't think I'll keep you here any longer, I have everything I need from you! I haven't broken any records for time tonight, though. Oh well! Time to conclude our business here!
:iconatanzeko:
Well this is my finalized App for PMD-e! Say hello to Team R&R everyone! :w00t:

So all of you know, the Image at the Top is not drawn by me! It is just a base I took from Google then recolored to fit my team is all.

I do hope I made a good choice by Joining PMD-e :D and hope that I have lots of fun too!

Anyone in PMD-e can use my characters for PMD-e stuff too, as long as they ask for permission first of course :)

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EDIT: Decided to add some details of these guys :D
EDIT2 I added in their backstories
EDIT3 Due to a most fascinating RP I had with :iconskywiz: Riku and Rosea will be taking residence with her Team Black Gold. I thank her for doing that and weather or not it will be temporary or whatever will all depend on what happens next :meow: We'll just have to wait and see
EDIT4 Okay so this time I now am putting down a small list of Pokemon Riku the Zorua is capable of transforming into with his Illusion ability. He is only limited to these Pokemon for now, but using his Illusion powers on the surrounding environments and visions of others he has no limits.
EDIT5 Ask Tumblr for these two and my other team right here [link] Do drop by and say hello :dummy:

Name: Riku
Backstory: Riku's parents were both Trapeze artist who worked for a unknown named traveling circus. Riku has three older sisters who were more interested in fashion and costume designing then trapeze. Riku was taught and trained by his parents to be an excellent trapeze artist since his hatching, and since then he has been a true prodigy of the art. Other then hanging out with Rosea or training with his parents Riku loved to spend his free time with the circus's clowns. You can say that is where he got his personality. [More information will appear as time goes on]
Personality: Clownish, he likes to play pranks and play jokes on them, then laugh about it with them afterwards. He will go to great lengths to spread his optimism to others. He loves to smile and see others smile. He considers Rosea like a Smarter Little Sister figure in his life (though they are not at all related) and he likes to call her "Rosy" from time to time. During his time in the circus he has grown to love testing his skills, including his favorite skill which is his balancing act. He'll get up on two or one paw and jump around while keeping his balance if he can.
Age: 13 (Human Years)
Unique Features: His Fur is slightly different in color, and he has heterochromia with his right eye Blue and the other Red.
EDIT: He now wears the red bandanna as of M7, sorry if it's crappy ^^;
EDIT: List of Pokemon he can transform into: Shuckle, Treecko, Darumaka, Drifloon, and Whirlipede. (Also know when he transforms his eye colors do not change)[Also know that he's transforming powers will grow with time]


Name: Rosea
Backstory: She grew up with Riku within a traveling circus. Her father, who she and most of the other kids with in the circus called him Papa, was the Ringleader of the Circus. And before Rosea's hatching he ran the circus with his wife a Gastrodon who loved to read and do paperwork. But she died sometime before Rosea's hatching from a terrible disease. Once Rosea was old enough she took over her mother's job in helping with the paperwork for the circus. [More information will appear as time goes on]
Personality: She is the smart type in this team. She likes to read books and test her mind on riddles. She also likes to laugh when Riku pulls pranks, but she always makes sure he doesn't go too far. She is still training her psychic powers and when using them to an extent she ends up feeling drained and tired. She considers Riku like a Older Joker Brother to her. She doesn't like to fight but will act out of Self Defense if she's backed into a corner.
Age: 10 (Human Years)
Unique Features: She has a pinkish body inside her gel form.
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~UnknownOO8 Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a question: what is the hidden power type of Rosea, if she has any?

Also, I would point out that it's better if you take some personalities taken from the official game. See this site: [link] The first list is the list of natures which you already have. Scroll down a bit and you'll see "Phenotypes". As the description mentions, they are also called 'characteristics' or 'traits'. Could you pick one from that list? Note that you can also leave the ones you already have, so that you have two things under personality.

I would also say that saying the paragraph right above is against the group's rules, but in the spirit of that rule, I don't intend to cause any harassing. Feel free to ignore it if you want, I'm just trying to help.
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What do you mean by type? I mean if by type your asking what move type is it then it's Psychic type

Really? Oh my XD I've been going around fooling myself thinking that I did use proper traits. I feel like such an idiot. I'm going to go change those now. And for your thing, Riku will have "Somewhat of a clown" and Rosea will have "Often lost in thought"

No, thank you for pointing it out. Though it is going to be difficult for me to change it ^^; for some odd reason when I try to edit any of my stories here it makes these weird things pop up between words or letters and they're all random like <ashas> or something like that and sometimes I can never get them to go away. It's really frustrating. But thank you for pointing it out and thank you again for putting my team in your spreadsheet :D
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~UnknownOO8 Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Usually, Hidden Power takes on any of the different types existing in pokemon, except normal type. So, if you have a pokemon with Hidden Power, that Hidden Power might turn out to be water type, or fire type, or even dragon type, regardless of the Pokemon's typing. You can see [link] for the in depth mechanics. You don't need to involve numbers, but that's just for extra information.

As for those things that appear when you edit, it seems weird to me. :confused: I don't get any of those in mine ^^; Maybe they're just the html tags. I would recommend learning a bit about how they work. You don't need to read a lot about them, only how they work and I think you will understand which are important and which aren't so you can safely remove/change any of them. If I try to explain them here, deviantArt changes the way they appear after I post. :( It would be easier with something with Word.
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Ah, well right now I'm not in the mood for calculating so let's just say her Hidden Power is Psychic ^^; but I will take a look at that link sometime later since it sounds interesting

Ah, well I made the changes and those html tags or whatever they were did appear but I was able to keep them from appearing when I finished updating :phew: I guess I got lucky. Anyways, I saw that you added my team to the spreadsheet and would like to thank you again :D
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~UnknownOO8 Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, that's fine! Those are really random in the traditional games like Gold/Silver/Crystal up to the most recent ones. I don't try to remember them myself xD

No problem! I was glad to add a team I missed!
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~slydragoon16 Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very good, Atan. Short and sweet and nicely formatted for a team app. You're punctuation is good for fardfetched rank. However ya may want to leave stuff like *she turns to Riku* out of your writings. Hehe, save that style for the Rping, mmkay. You're writing a story not Rping with a buddy who needs you to respond quickly. Take your time to let the words and feelings come to you.

Anyways, hope that helps. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks :D and thanks for the advice. I'll be sure remember that, this was actually the first time writing in this style, I usually wrote in a "Script" kinda style ^^;
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~slydragoon16 Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, I see. Well, its good that you've improved. You're welcome.
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~Evil-Umbreon Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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~ZosoCruxyWulf Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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